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Open Poetry #35
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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-04-25 08:16 PM

We saw worlds

We strung out yesterday's dirty washing dropping eyes flayed in newspapers at our feet that scimmaged and saved holding releashing in mud
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froggy
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1 posted 2005-04-26 10:14 PM

I like this piece.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-04-27 06:43 AM

indeed...worlds, yes
Ericc
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3 posted 2005-04-27 02:29 PM

So much power in so few, well chosen words.

Great write Dave.

Eric
DavePage
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4 posted 2005-04-27 03:35 PM

Thanks all

I'll try and write the male side to the female side of some words

Dave
WindWalker
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5 posted 2005-04-28 10:49 PM

I like this; and yes So much power in so few words; well done!
LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-04-29 08:05 AM

wow, enjoyed, well done David
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