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Open Poetry #35

Five O Five AM

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2005-04-27 02:54 PM

Where did the sweet vision go,
I'll follow,
Into forest I don't know
Down the narrow winding trail,
I'll follow
The fleeting beauty so pale
That set my heart to pounding,
I'll follow,
Through ditch and corners rounding,
Ignore the physical cost
I'll follow
Till I'm spent and find I'm lost,
Very lost.

Spirit lost
When gone is vision of white,
The falling
And crawling
In hopes of recaptured sight,
Let me see
Her beauty
Once more before I am dead,
I cry there
In despair
For all the feelings have fled,
Very lost
I fall deep into the night.

Whisper me the new morning
Arouse me from that mourning
I fear the opening eyes
To discover what is real,
What is truth and what is lies
If just a dreaming I feel.

Gloom

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-04-27 03:02 PM

Whisper me the new morning
Arouse me from that mourning
I fear the opening eyes
To discover what is real,
What is truth and what is lies
If just a dreaming I feel.

Be very, very quiet, open your eyes slowly....maybe she wasn't a dream.
Very nice. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-04-27 03:13 PM

a heartfelt write

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