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0 posted 2005-04-26 01:55 PM



go on break my heart
it has been crumpled before
give it your best shot
I will only cry one tear
must not waste anymore on you


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Chris Barker
April 2005
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1 posted 2005-04-26 01:56 PM


oh Chrisy this one aches.  Heart hugs hon.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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2 posted 2005-04-26 02:29 PM


Thankyou Donna.....just one of those days ya know? Hugs!
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3 posted 2005-04-26 02:40 PM


yep, yep, sure do sweetie
and you know right where i'm at
if ya need a clawin post!!  

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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4 posted 2005-04-26 03:22 PM


I know Chris...I know.
Chin up, and take care of your throat.
Hugs, Love & Miss ya, Teed

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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5 posted 2005-04-26 03:52 PM


Thanks Teed...you know how I am hurting. Oh, and my throat is better....it just my head now feels like it is inside a fishbowl. Yuck! Luv Ya!
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6 posted 2005-04-26 04:57 PM


Chris

I dont know the background and I wont ever consider intruding

Your poem spoke of pain short sharp hitting everything you valued

Take care is all I can say

Dave

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7 posted 2005-04-26 06:02 PM


Thanks Dave for your kind remarks.
All will be well. Hugs!

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8 posted 2005-04-26 06:56 PM


Chris - you write this feeling very very well - sorry you are hurting - paul
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9 posted 2005-04-26 07:15 PM


Awww...thankyou Paul. I will be fine. Hugs!
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10 posted 2005-04-26 07:16 PM


oh *sigh*
but maybe that tear will cleanse?

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11 posted 2005-04-26 07:38 PM


Holding you close in my thoughts, little one...


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12 posted 2005-04-26 07:41 PM


Kacy & Karilea - hugs and thanks!
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13 posted 2005-04-26 07:48 PM


one tear is one too many for some of them

enjoyed the write

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14 posted 2005-04-26 07:48 PM


good read
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15 posted 2005-04-26 07:50 PM


Dixie and vandana - thankyou both for reading and commenting. Hugs!
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16 posted 2005-04-26 08:08 PM


Awwww Chris, I hope you feel better, soon.
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17 posted 2005-04-26 08:51 PM


Thanks Sue, you're a dear. Hugs!
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18 posted 2005-04-26 09:35 PM


I know how you feel   Heartfelt read, hope your days get brighter!

Brian

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19 posted 2005-04-26 10:24 PM


Thankyou Brian for taking the time to read and comment.

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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