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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you moved my toys they were only stones but you were only a river to me and not a lover except on sunday afternoons when you touched me privately with the depth of you that cooler place down lower than your reflections I go back there now with a suit case mind but the round ones are turned and the trees say you did it when you were angry with me so I could not find any memories under my tip toes again since I am too tall now to let you hold me and you have become too shallow to drown more than my footprints __________________ dark (scribblenote: colo river and lake powell view |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice~~ MM |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Everything changes. "I am too tall now to let you hold me and you have become too shallow" and next rain they will change again.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Loved your reflections in this wonderful piece that captures the images well! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I go back there now with a suit case mind but the round ones are turned and the trees say you did it ~*~ smiling at this... and at the brass of your locks on that suitcase mind. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-26-2005 10:50 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you moved my toys they were only stones but you were only a river to me and not a lover except on sunday afternoons when you touched me privately with the depth of you that cooler place down lower than your reflections ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you know the webtoed moth LOVES this one. yayaya  way cool write groovy guy. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
D, oh D - i cannot sing your praises loud enough - I know a ocean you can immerse yourself in -  SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
awwww ladies you make me smile, thank you all for the sweet touches...and for reading this tribute to the powell |
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