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Open Poetry #35
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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-04-25 04:37 PM

We washed ideas on ideas that in dropping eyes flayed in sand  on our feet that gangled on a surface holding releashing in sand

We saw worlds
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-04-25 06:21 PM

so much, in so few words

neat!

God only promises a safe landing, not a calm flight.



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-04-25 06:23 PM

Enjoyed...James
DavePage
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3 posted 2005-04-25 08:18 PM

Passing/James

Many thanks

Dave
froggy
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4 posted 2005-04-26 10:16 PM

Apparently I should of started on this one first :-)
Fine piece of work my friend.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world
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