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left in love.
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left in love. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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i left your apartment and you left me in love let's call it quits because i'm tired and i'm cold and you just don't have the energy not for me not for this so you left me in love. i let you stand there and tell me how it is. tell me how it is please because someone like me someone like me wouldn't know just say it. i left the car and you left me in love. let's call it payback. these hands these hands that used to hold you tight and tell you the world wouldn't leave you i wouldn't leave you .. i'm leaving.. a ring around your neck. you left my side and i, i left you in love. |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
This is a well written poem that many people can and will identify with. I liked it very much. But just out of curiosity do you believe that by living a ring around his neck he'll return the favour with a ring around your finger? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good write...you conveyed intense emotion well... Goldenrose. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
incredible |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that love place.....does it again |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
well done. -majnu |
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