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this falling of spring
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this falling of spring |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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i am only half of me without the flesh and kisses or the blood and salt in this rising of autumn this falling of spring a bitter-sweet collision and i will go on to face the meshing of the seasons the silent whisperings that fill my mouth with madness as the days slip round me longer than the blur of a time that is not your own "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is wonderful. Thank you for sharing it here. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
An incredible array of words warmly touches life's story...enjoyed |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
and the half that is left is only a guest in your destiny a musing of wings that suggests we might rise |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"the silent whisperings that fill my mouth with madness" brava! Bonita! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
in this rising of autumn this falling of spring a bitter-sweet collision The image produced by your stunning words unveils the frailty of being. Love, Margherita |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you for sharing, enjoyed your words very, very much Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very well written and much enjoyed. Well done Maree. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just wonderful writing..leaving me speechless  M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree "as the days slip round me longer than the blur of a time that is not your own" Excellent!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
what you see maree... ------- when i get back to boston if i promise to send what i was to send so long ago now, perhaps you could return with one of these handwritten...it would be such a treat! ------- your writing is fine... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
love it. dotdot. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i've read this a few times now, under the impression that i'd responded..i hadn't so i'm doing it now.. wow. yeah kind of a letdown after that preamble but i can't find the words at the moment |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome. hugs, Chris "The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the silent whisperings that fill my mouth with madness Incredible you are lady... as is this. Superb write! I really want to care, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It is good to be back.....there are fences to ride and hay to put up before winter, but there are flowers in the grass and the streams are full of trout..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
gentle fury as always, im caught |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i need those collissions they make me feel like i fit in afterall........somewhere masterfully done, poet diva |
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