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In Soft Outlasting
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In Soft Outlasting |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Dismiss me then In symbols of dissension, stripped emotion from the bones Just lust, a common interest done in fun, rehearsed in ample minus one Involved to linger unresolved, simply put to bed instead Guided through the course of life incensed and sensing Questions of commitment hang in fog before an April cleansing Feelings swallowed whole attempted squander heart and soul He moves…discomforted her honest grooves, the circles scour and scout Which way is out, which door the doubt, away the torrents all about Nourished in his own thoughts, supposed, disposed a lull haunts him Dismiss me then It is your feeling reeling that pulses through my veins, my ego wanes For more and unlike all before, you are the love that beats within me The come and go of end begins me…waited in the rhythm of every sound Moving earth and heaven to the shores where love is found Living on the breath that you are finished with, giving of the air diminished Softly did she speak into his mouth…again Dismiss me then Copyright Kkh 04/24/05 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (04-24-2005 05:28 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that ending verse |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD You title enchanted me...then the poem touched me deeply with the capture of unique and rhyme and as you always do, meaning for my time. Thank you.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Moving earth and heaven to the shores where love is found Living on the breath that you are finished with, giving of the air diminished Softly did she speak into his mouth…again Dismiss me then" Another outstanding write from your enchanting pen Kathleen. Well done and so much enjoyed! Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Your refined words of passion once again render me speachless and wanting more. If this is only lust you speak of I can't help but wonder what love would be like penned by you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoying your words, several times over, TD M |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Being a passionate and I believe a good man, I still find it hard to love unconditionally and solely; it is hard to explain and I have had many discussions with other men and it just is what it is; but have faith, I think we are finally starting to get it. Enjoyed this beautiful piece! |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
This poem reads as if in a struggle to remove the stain of emotions... poignant write, beautiful flow... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!! Eric |
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