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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-04-24 04:43 PM

Dismiss me then
In symbols of dissension, stripped emotion from the bones
Just lust, a common interest done in fun, rehearsed in ample minus one
Involved to linger unresolved, simply put to bed instead

Guided through the course of life incensed and sensing
Questions of commitment hang in fog before an April cleansing
Feelings swallowed whole attempted squander heart and soul

He moves…discomforted her honest grooves, the circles scour and scout
Which way is out, which door the doubt, away the torrents all about
Nourished in his own thoughts, supposed, disposed a lull haunts him
Dismiss me then

It is your feeling reeling that pulses through my veins, my ego wanes
For more and unlike all before, you are the love that beats within me
The come and go of end begins me…waited in the rhythm of every sound

Moving earth and heaven to the shores where love is found
Living on the breath that you are finished with, giving of the air diminished
Softly did she speak into his mouth…again
Dismiss me then

Copyright Kkh 04/24/05

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (04-24-2005 05:28 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-24 05:12 PM

love that ending verse

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-04-24 08:25 PM

TD

You title enchanted me...then the poem touched me deeply with the capture of unique and rhyme and as you always do, meaning for my time. Thank you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-04-24 08:32 PM

"Moving earth and heaven to the shores where love is found
Living on the breath that you are finished with, giving of the air diminished
Softly did she speak into his mouth…again
Dismiss me then"

Another outstanding write from your enchanting pen Kathleen.
Well done and so much enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

4 posted 2005-04-25 02:06 AM

Your refined words of passion once again render me speachless and wanting more. If this is only lust you speak of I can't help but wonder what love would be like penned by you.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2005-04-25 07:46 PM

enjoying your words, several times over, TD

M

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

6 posted 2005-04-26 04:59 PM

Being a passionate and I believe a good man, I still find it hard to love unconditionally and solely; it is hard to explain and I have had many discussions with other men and it just is what it is; but have faith, I think we are finally starting to get it. Enjoyed this beautiful piece!

Aleta
Member

since 2005-04-17

Posts 102
Louisiana

7 posted 2005-04-26 05:15 PM

This poem reads as if in a struggle to remove the stain of emotions... poignant write, beautiful flow...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2005-04-26 07:52 PM

good read

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2005-04-27 02:34 PM

Wow...!!!!

Eric

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