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EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

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0 posted 2005-04-24 10:19 AM

Longing Obscures Voracious Eroticism

We are twilight groans—
cerise colored cheeks,
creamy bosoms...
coal black eyes.

Into nightfall’s twinkling,
hardened want espouses us one to the other.
Its' thrusting sheaths our tenderness,
enflames our vital fluids,
'til a deluge of eroticism are we.

Amongst weighty coverlets and glossy silk bed sheets,
fleeting cries weigh times' crossing,
for we’re Prussian red lips,
which ache for a silken peck.

In that instant of indivisibility,
we descend towards the palisades of paradise,
trembling hearts thrumming in miraculous meter,
for beautiful longing obscures voracious eroticism.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-04-24 10:25 AM

In that instant of indivisibility,
we descend towards the palisades of paradise,

Just so! Passionate.

Whether you DEscend or Ascend doesn't matter, but no doubt you LOCATED it in that moment.

Love,
Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2005-04-24 10:43 AM

Sometimes, when you write EV, the sensations of your words actually spirit a touch.
Well done.
TD

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2005-04-24 11:47 AM

EV2,
Hm... a very passionate write, enhanced by the truth, L.O.V.E.
~miscellanea

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-04-24 12:51 PM

EV2

How passonate this is...and it would seem that you write from the afterglow.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-04-24 03:29 PM

incredible!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-04-24 03:42 PM

Kevin this is SO passionate!!
Wonderful write indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2005-04-24 05:19 PM

Such beautiful words you pen to paper.
Love is beautiful and even more so when shared with another.
Rather it be through words or with the special person.

;-)

Hugs to you from me

Amour Vous

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

8 posted 2005-04-26 04:05 AM

Thank-you all for the wonderful comments. This though in truth was just pulled out of the air. The title is suppose to be a moral I suppose. It means longing/love overshadows greedy lust. In my mind when I read it it says love is forever...lust but passing moment. Anyway thanks all. It is 3 a.m. and I am off to bed. Have to get up in 1 1/2 hours for work. Oh boy! ROFLMAO!

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