Open Poetry #35 |
The Last Shaman |
WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Time's lonely shadows lengthen over the earth: the spirit of Wind Walker stands alone atop a rising knoll overlooking empty rolling plains; a restless autumn wind blows unchecked, untamed, moaning tearful over desecrated burial grounds. Wind Walker hears the coyotes howl in pale moonlight; the thunder of mighty buffalo herds crossing the plains; feels the throbbing drums around flickering camp fires; sees his people, ghosts from years of fulness, performing the ancient buffalo dance. He smells the smoke rising peacefully in the clear night... then the vision, so sweet to the eye, vanishes, as did the buffalo and the people. Numb of soul and empty of heart, Wind Walker turns toward the spirit mountains, taking the hallowed path of the grandfathers: the last shaman of the great plains to seek a vision for understanding: why did the white man so savagely destroy his world? kill his blood brothers? annihilate the life-giving buffalo? What kind of hatred moved such a plague across the once-living prairie? As Wind Walker approaches snow-capped giants a thunderous echo beckons: he realizes his earth time is of the past; his restless, homeless spirit, like the people of the campfires, the coyotes of the moonlight, the buffaloes on their ghostly trek, must relinquish their place in the foothills: the conquerors lay their pipelines and fences cutting furrows deep into the soil. Only acceptance, only love can now decide the future of a once proud and virgin land: no challenge, no showdown, no vengeance, but simple understanding, can ever demonstrate the truth. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent! Speechless here...this is really striking in it's explanation, understanding and truth. As a crystal pool, the ripples flow outward. TD |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
It speaks the heart. Acceptance is all that remains, not the land or buffalo. Outstanding poetry, yet our loss is disturbing. miscellanea |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
The truth is clear enough his destiny on the wind the man of the earth with his colors blended has sealed his own fate glider |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Captivating write, much enjoyed. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Being the odd one, I reject 'acceptance.' I fight submission, feel the spirit of the phoenix yet lives. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I read this last night along with many on your homepage and enjoyed every single one, and will try to get to them all eventually. Very nicely done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write...so very much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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