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Raspberry Murmurs
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Raspberry Murmurs |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Raspberry Murmurs Revisiting, winter cleaves a distance in uncertain instance As the rock, paper, scissors shivers upon newly budded seeds Through my window holding warm the simmer of my needs Private talks with you, blue eyes abysmal to the cool of fool Stirred emotions notion now all that was felt and how the snows melt Jubilant the tango light fandango that we push and pull with hearts so full To spill over, streams conjoined in dreams and swift the light fantastic Hiding from ourselves and from each other with regard, love so elastic A smile is always waiting by the tears, flooding over miles and years Long and strong the beat of endless fascination, stems a rose from hibernation The fruits of shared remember, one September colors all the rest, the best Futility, the snows in glee fall fervently to pools of sparkling jewels And least a kiss blown to you on the wind that I will not rescind Admiration glows undimmed, and sow hello in raspberry murmurs Copyright Kkh 04/23/05 |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Excelent mummering indeed, but how are you at stuttering. I very much enjoyed this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"A smile is always waiting by the tears, flooding over miles and years Long and strong the beat of endless fascination, stems a rose from hibernation The fruits of shared remember, one September colors all the rest, the best Futility, the snows in glee fall fervently to pools of sparkling jewels" Mmmmmm...read this Kathleen and you know, I don't feel the same about the snow now.  Excellent write indeed. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yes, a very enjoyable read, my friend, one that most certainly deserves "...a kiss blown to you on the wind that I will not rescind".... Jimmy |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was really good, I love the imagery in this well crafted poem! |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
A soft, gentle sound this poem flows, encompassing a plant of the rose family that produces the fruits of emotions. Beautiful write. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
A smile is always waiting by the tears, flooding over miles and years You did it again, TD. You left a phrase buzzing over and over in my ears. I have never read one of your poems that this didn't happen. You write so melodically. miscellanea |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I really like this one. Almost musical as mine eyes devour each word. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
the snows in glee fall fervently to pools of sparkling jewels A hello that echoes beautifully in the heart. Perfectly penned, as usual! Love, Margherita |
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