Open Poetry #35 |
I was on duty in Hell |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I was on duty in Hell When the late shift came in Always guarding checking We are careful on that shift Hell is below And on the late you get Those escaping up Showing you their chit Peter's usually around But the heat does get you down And chits moulder in the heat And dont ask me about my seat Still another hour to go Coal delivery sinking low All the thanks I get for this Was an offer of 10 minutes bliss |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I really enjoyed this - a peek into a moment and a feeling - well done - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Susan Thanks you for the 30 seconds 9 1/2 minutes to go Dave |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Wow. Powerful. Hell's a ride that no one wants to go on...unfortunately, there's a long line to the top. I was touched by this poem. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
good one dave~ My spirit will rise |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Good write Dave. Enjoyed. Chris |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
good one different I liked it Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me think about what things are worth |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks everyone for your words Dave |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love it. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a playful write for such a sore subject! I noticed the supply of coal is low. Sure hope it runs out soon... miscee |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
froggy Love it. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world Thanks Froggy. Maybe today the bathroom, tomorrow the world. miscellanea I think they will always have something to burn. Thanks dave |
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