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Rick
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0 posted 2005-04-23 07:49 PM



Were poets born to fill the void of they that cannot speak?
Were we born to feel their pain while searching what they seek?
Were poets given souls of lost that hide within their head?
Were we born to think too much and find the answers said?

Do we suffer more than most from what our minds do see?
Are the chains of words too strong to one day set us free?
Are our minds receivers of what the world would tell?
Do all poets write the words of they who rose and fell?


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1 posted 2005-04-23 07:53 PM


I know that I was born to think too much

sometimes a blessing, sometimes a curse

Good write Rick

Rick
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2 posted 2005-04-23 07:58 PM


Hi Dixie, I know I also think too much, nice to see you again, thanks for the reply so quickly, have a lovely day.

Sincerely
Rick

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3 posted 2005-04-23 08:15 PM


Nice writing...James
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4 posted 2005-04-23 08:23 PM


Hi Rick,
I think writers are deep thinkers..
and show and feel much more emotion than others.
Good questions here!!
Hugs~Nancy

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dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Rick
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5 posted 2005-04-23 08:26 PM


James, thanks for your reply, appreciated.

Dear Nancy, great to be a deep thinker, thank you for your reply.

Sincerely
Rick

HopeS
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6 posted 2005-04-24 10:04 AM


Yes I think we all have much of what you said Rick ..... my mind is over active , I think way too much , but them I have been told that I worry too much too

Hope

Margherita
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7 posted 2005-04-24 10:45 AM


Dear Rick, I believe Earth and all of Creation represent a divine Poem and those with a poetic heart know and share their knowing.

Though I believe also in ONENESS I hope I don't have any lost soul hidden in my head, but then who knows ... if we can be of help to rescue some...?!

Appreciated your questions.

Love, Margherita  

Suetang
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8 posted 2005-04-24 05:05 PM


Hello Rick

How wonderful it is to read your words of wisdom again.  My mind never seems to shut down and the words just continue to flow like blood through my veins.  There is a downside in that sometimes my writing leaves me feeling emotionally drained, as it has been lately.  It is nearly the sixth anniversary of my father's death and I guess that has a lot to do with it.

I hope all is well in your life.

Take care........Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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9 posted 2005-04-24 09:42 PM


Rick - I'll have to think about this for awhile.
Enjoyed the write. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

LeeJ
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10 posted 2005-04-25 06:47 AM


another thought provoking ponder...

I believe poets are of the artistic culture...and are products yes, of the pain, they've endured, but I also believe that poets/artists are a bit more spiritual, perceptive, sensative, and have the ability to listen, sensing, almost knowing the existence of another dimension, walking here on earth with us, perhaps many other dimensions...feeling them...and their writes articulate the readers own eyes, whatever his/her ability is to see...for perhaps growth, a smile, self understanding...to gain...hopefully from our words...I know, since I've been writing here at PIP, the reading has served me well...with many regards to you and all who place there words on these blue pages. Perhaps our purpose Rick, to stimulate and help each other towards answers, without even being aware of the effects?  

Hugs

Rick
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11 posted 2005-04-25 09:25 AM


Hope, it is good to see you here, over active minds is us, maybe we would not like it any other way?? thanks for your reply here.

Margherita, good to read you again, thanks for your reply and comments.

Dear Sue, great to see you, time has flown, six years already, hope you are well yourself my friend, I am fine, good to see you are still here, take care and be well.
Thanks for your reply.

Chris, take as long as you like my friend, I am still thinking about it, thanks for the reply, see you again soon.

Dear Lee, you leave me in awe with your comments, you have a talent to relate and share your thoughts, thank you for that.

To you all my friends, again thank you.
See you all again soon.

Sincerely
Rick

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12 posted 2005-04-26 08:44 AM


This reminds me of the old cherry-stone song...

As for the poem itself, to ponder all of those thoughts, and to inherently know that the answer [for me] is yes to all...

well, that just shows me that we are kindred spirits.  

This, m'friend, is a of the first degree.  

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

ThUnDeRkYsS
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13 posted 2005-04-26 11:23 PM


This is very well written, very well indeed.  Like this a lot.

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



Rick
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14 posted 2005-05-05 08:42 AM


Dear Sunshine, great to see you here my friend, thank you so much for your reply.
Lovely you see it as a keeper.

Brian, good to have you here, thank you for your reply, appreciated.

Sincerely
RIck

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