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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-04-23 10:41 AM



Wishing
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Wishing
It were not so
Knowing full-well it is
Grasping at your heartstrings, I am
Pulling you back within encircled love
Right where you will always belong
Nevermore letting go
Of your sweet grace
Wishing~



~For you ... because I love you~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-04-23 10:44 AM


Marge,
A kindly wish.

SEA
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2 posted 2005-04-23 11:04 AM


this reads like a hug feels
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3 posted 2005-04-23 11:27 AM


Such a compassionate loving embrace, dear Marge!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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4 posted 2005-04-23 12:37 PM


Very sweet thoughts Marge.
Hugs~Nancy

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dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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5 posted 2005-04-23 01:55 PM


Dear Marge:

Very tender and "wishful"

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2005-04-23 02:08 PM


Wishes are the map for dreams...the journey is breathtaking.
Hugs back,
TD

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7 posted 2005-04-23 03:55 PM


Sweet words..beautifuly
said.

Eric

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8 posted 2005-04-23 05:26 PM


another beauty

Marge, you are loved

Aleta
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9 posted 2005-04-24 12:21 PM


Lovely form…. And where you have this line:

“Pulling you back within encircled love”

and then the poem tightens down in lines, is if that “pulling you back” motion… Just Lovely!

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10 posted 2005-04-24 02:51 PM


Lovely sentiment, Marge!
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11 posted 2005-04-24 03:38 PM


always a lovely write for your love~~

hugs
M

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12 posted 2005-04-24 05:55 PM


Grace.....good word for a Sunday -- or any day. I've gotten some, given some, seen a miracle or two.....



~~J

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13 posted 2005-04-24 08:03 PM


very tender and sweet!  May you have your wish.
             misce

Martie
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14 posted 2005-04-24 08:19 PM


Marge/sis

Your heart is a treasure chest!  

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15 posted 2005-04-25 04:09 AM


Nice Marge...James
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16 posted 2005-04-25 05:01 AM


A beautiful poem...

Goldenrose.

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17 posted 2005-04-25 05:25 PM


Bravo! a wonderfull write..........adagio
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18 posted 2005-04-26 05:20 PM


I agree with SEA... you've written a hug... that wraps more tenderly with every word. *S* So very beautiful... *S*
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19 posted 2005-04-26 07:05 PM



I know this gal with golden heart
Who in my life slowly took part
Her pen is filled with loving ink
It's you dear Marge about whom I think

Titia


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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20 posted 2005-04-26 07:49 PM


good read
Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2005-04-27 11:00 AM



My sincerest appreciation to each of you~

And to one ... it warms my heart to know you received my *hug*~

Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Betty
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22 posted 2005-05-01 09:08 AM


This is warm & fuzzy
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