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Yesterday Missing
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Yesterday Missing I missed the voice of everyday Pretending the "charming" of use to be Will differ tomorrow and light its way A gift of smile for one to see. I missed the feeling of arms that hold A kiss goodnight on lips or cheek The tongue-tied-thoughts to hear unfold Contentment's need, of soft technique. I missed the deepness that sharing brings The racing heart, desires storm Whispered moments of happenings That edge to gather and fill the warm. The other side of me still waits In sunlight breaking through the mist Though only as the mind creates Recalling you, and days when kissed. A shade of midnight poses thought When yesterday missing, reversed the "naught". M * thank you for the title ~~Bernie~~ "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
your welcome, taking yesterday forward to the present. and good ending, un-tie those "naughts" bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nice, my friend...even uplifting (from the viewpoint of being buried in pain) - very much a poem of healing. And written so well... Very much enjoyed reading this... Jimmy |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
nakdthoughts, Love this from title on! I guess it has me wondering how we live a today if yesterday is totally lost. Yet, one can't deny the inexhaustible empty feeling that is there. I suppose it is like energy, never truly lost. Sometimes it sure would be nice to know where all the energy goes, though! I enjoy your well expressed poetry. miscellanea |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are very welcome Bernie~~ thanks for the time sharing. Jimmy, thought I would write in rhyme and post so some can see I am still alive and well...moving forward slowly but making great strides. miscellanea, I appreciate the time you take to let me know if my words touched you. I am trying to write on a positive note...or at least one of contentment. Thank you, M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think sometimes it's good for yesterday to be missing. I wish I could lose mine and never find it again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write once again Maureen. Hugs to you m'friend. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nice one Dave |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...sometimes I miss the good of yesterday...James |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very good. Wish I had more time to respond but this library offers limited compute r time. lots more to read tonight before time is up.:O |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sometimes? i love the way "yesterdays" just creep up on us, but only sometimes. yer lovely Maureen Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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