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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
Morph me into landscape lines of liquid hues and digital light where the red and orange heat tension of waking moments blinds into the afternoon sky bidding adieu taunt creases Cast a net around the middle greens and purple reflections as silvery olive groves slumber then incline their opinion of peace with lethargic rolls on casual hills Wade cool blues of muscle drifting into tumbling creeks then cascading down delicate Wisteria blooms, wistful of the woody, twining vines carrying over clay stained pottery chiseled steps Transform life to landscape Sunset me over Tuscany Facing west to paradise dreams |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome Aleta! This is stunning! Very much enjoyed the picture you painted here...  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS !!!!!! . . . Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Wow what an awesome first post Aleta. I will be looking foward to reading your future post. Again bravo and welcome to pips. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I very much enjoyed your opening post. Looking forward to reading more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so wonderful to see you here! I hope you enjoy it. |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
Thank you so very much for your warm welcome and kind words; it’s much appreciated! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I don't know what there is about Tuscany....but it wouldn't surprise me to learn that it changes everyone who is there for more than a day....it changed me, I know. Welcome aboard, thou winsome wench! I'm glad you decided to join this family! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed this well written piece, my friend. Loved the ending....and am wondering if I know you from Pearl River/Slidell. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Aleta~ Well ... I needed a *happy* to start my day ... and you just gave it to me ! Welcome dear lady ... you are poetic beauty in full blossom ...~ And ... anybody who's anybody will no doubt delight in visiting your Tara Plantation~ It makes my heart glad to have you join us here~  Thank you for coming in ... stay a long, long, while~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ <)))>< ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Transform life to landscape Sunset me over Tuscany Facing west to paradise dreams ~*~ And the transformation becomes reality... Please, check your e-mail for a very Special Greeting! Welcome to Passions, Aleta. I'm looking forward to more of your poetry! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Cast a net around the middle greens and purple reflections as silvery olive groves slumber then incline their opinion of peace with lethargic rolls on casual hills Wonderful imagery, dear Aleta. Welcome to Pip! Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to PIP. A beautiful entrance, m'dear. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Aleta What glorious imagery ...so enjoyed! Welcome to Passions! |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
Oh heavens! Such kind people here at Passions to give this welcome and encouragement. My heartfelt thanks and smiles! |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
What a marvalous scene you present here! Hope to read more from you. Will be looking for you.(I'm from Louisiana too) adagio |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! such fun imagery, nice visuals! WELCOME!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
drifting into tumbling creeks then cascading down delicate Wisteria blooms, wistful of the woody, twining vines How absolutely lovely!!! I love your vivid visuals... Welcome to Passions! *S* |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Very simply.... wow. Welcome to the family. They took pictures of our dreams |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions good read |
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