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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-04-21 06:50 AM

I know a kiss would soothe the ease
of this silent morn, lacking rain
but air filled to capacity
leaving me feeling frizzy.

A good day ahead, to catch the smiles
of little ones, trying to resist the laughter
that rises in me when they say and do
what parents should only be able to enjoy.

A back road drive, to enjoy the greening
of the Spring time scenery, the golden flecks
of Daffodils and dangly branches of Forsythia
inviting the eyes to gaze into tomorrow.

The shadows are parting and I can see
the morning stars guiding me today.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-04-21 06:56 AM

If the morning stars are guiding you?

then I am walking in your footsteps shadowed.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-21 08:34 AM

I know a kiss would soothe the ease
of this silent morn, lacking rain
but air filled to capacity
leaving me feeling frizzy.

this gave me a smile, as the entire poem paints a languid pretty sea....

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

3 posted 2005-04-21 09:16 AM

and every day is a different days with the little ones
which can make every day feel like a spring day

i can see your liking this working thingy.

bernie

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-04-21 01:12 PM

it's what you were meant to do

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2005-04-21 04:14 PM

I like your words.

"I know a kiss would soothe the ease
of this silent morn, lacking rain"

I think we all like alternatives.

Take care

Dave

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

6 posted 2005-04-21 05:46 PM

BEAUTIFUL!! I felt this in so many ways. I truly enjoyed this poem.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-04-21 05:49 PM

Enjooyed...James

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