Open Poetry #35 |
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Great Day to Fly or Die |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
![]() Three days in the coming just two feet climbing the steep. Following The Children of the Mists ancient tread, rising beyond the Lake of Rippling Waters. An old body aches from the effort it takes, blood soaks boots from heels that break. The dark is quicker no view to share now wait the morning. No rolling hills here, simply two thousand foot sheer and the lake hidden in mists below. The precipice at my aching feet as rising on the day the sun does greet, bleeding voluptuously into sky while the mind holds sway. Could be a great day to fly or die? no need of rip stop canopy just a two step to eternity. No blot on the landscape, only another bleeding son in the mist below. But thoughts like sunrise are fleeing things and the question remains, could it have been a great day to fly or die? The answer lies in the valley between a gentle woman's sighs. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my! How gorgeous! what a creative presentation! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely wondrous...and your words are truely gifted, to us. thank you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautiful view... M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, it's about time, dear prophet, that you came back into the family fold! Welcome back! Thank you for sharing the view from before you leapt! Breath-taking! My 'was-band' was an extreme sky-diver and he was always pushing the limits on the sport. Your poem brought to mind what was written on the strut of his plane, "Watch out for that first step! ~ It's a bug--r!" lol I thoroughly enjoyed this! Welcome back hugs, EA |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
passing shadows, Lee J, nakdthoughts, Earth Angel, thank you for stopping in to read. 15 days later and I am still awaiting the heal of heels to allow me to wear shoes again. However the photographs I obtained that morning were worth it. Pleased you enjoyed. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Bare-footed rock climbing. Talk about extreme sports. *s A lovely write and an equally breathtaking scene. |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Chanson, No, it was only barefoot after the boots came off. Another couple of days and I might be able to wear shoes again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Enchanting. I loved this poem. I was rocked slowly to its beauty. Thank you for releasing my tension (I have opening night of play tonight)! Again...Beautiful. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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