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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-04-20 02:34 PM




Perhaps we will find that God is
not absent from a touch.

And that our fingers pray a holy
line of silent inspiration.

What then?

Will our reach become the
Garden's door?

And is our touch the key?

"What then?"....our fingers
pray into the night.

Perhaps by dawn...

We'll know for
sure.



[This message has been edited by Ericc (04-21-2005 08:10 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2005-04-20 03:11 PM


Oh, the joy to be had in the search for an answer...


Linda

Susan
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2 posted 2005-04-20 03:13 PM


soft and lovely wondering -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Enchantress
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3 posted 2005-04-20 03:25 PM


Gentle pondering...lovely indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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4 posted 2005-04-20 08:53 PM


perhaps
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2005-04-20 11:11 PM


The search is sacred.
Amazing write Eric.
TD

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6 posted 2005-04-21 02:32 PM


simply said...it's a very nice question to ponder on...wonderufl write
DavePage
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7 posted 2005-04-21 04:06 PM


Eric

You have often said to me "I cant understand your poem" and I must echo that in the content and delivery.

I am sorry mate but "whatever we have moves in mysterious ways" and in those ways we learn but who decides "what we should learn".

Take care

Dave

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8 posted 2005-04-22 02:42 PM


soft and lovely ponderings...
very well done Eric

Margherita
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9 posted 2005-04-23 12:32 PM


And is our touch the key?

I do believe in our divine nature and thus this touch brings divine joy, opening to a wider view of who we are.

You search so beautifully, dear Eric.

I love you.
Margherita



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10 posted 2005-04-26 04:26 PM


This takes my breath... it's that beautiful... yes. *S*
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11 posted 2005-04-28 12:26 PM


Or....perhaps we'll never know, even then....but it won't matter.

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