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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-04-19 02:15 PM

The Day's Take

Could it be the fever that brings me
to thoughts of you and the heat of bodies
pressing the want or is it just revenge
seeking to punish me for tempting fate.

I dream of the strength of hands
that can ease the tension,
and field my mind, patching the emptiness
to quicken my breath as the warm waters
pass over me and I rise in greet.

I sit in the warmth of the sun to heal,
closing my eyes to the sounds of life
and offer myself in thought, no rhythm or rhyme,
just peace and tranquility, probably
for the first time in a very long time
challenging my mood to devote a smile to the day.

I am fed by the depths of feelings
that I find in the lyrics, releasing emotions,
removing the chill that held me in its grasp
trying to bury me the night before.

I have covered the mirrors...
and am loving the day.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

1 posted 2005-04-19 02:26 PM

Beautifully penned M, glad to read you again, such a touching message in this about ones self.

HugZ
Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-19 02:38 PM

I sit in the warmth of the sun to heal,
closing my eyes to the sounds of life
and offer myself in thought, no rhythm or rhyme,
just peace and tranquility, probably
for the first time in a very long time
challenging my mood to devote a smile to the day.

gloriously written, enjoyed this....

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

3 posted 2005-04-19 04:59 PM

You write well when you are ill.

Then again,

you write well when you are not ill.

Hugs

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2005-04-19 05:39 PM

beautiful suggestion
enjoyed~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-04-19 06:57 PM

loving the day is important
but uncover the mirrors and smile M
it's a beautiful one to look at

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-04-19 07:11 PM

Yes Maureen...take the covers off the mirrors...
and I hope you get rid of the fever soon.
Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

7 posted 2005-04-24 03:31 PM

I loved the mood on this one

Dave

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