Open Poetry #35 |
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Somebody |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Somebody I have this recurring dream where I'm running from a faceless woman and all the seagalls down Hermosa Beach wait for the moment when all my hopes fall out of my pockets and are left behind then I wake in a cold sweat, and I know now that it's time time to make someone mine Somebody put the hurt on me and good I'm bleeding from the heart on my sleeve someone better hurry, yeah somebody should see me ready to receive make me repent and believe in somebody once more so won't you come through my door and love me I've been collecting up all these endearing schemes of mine and all the angels on heaven's golden shore sure like fine when all the tired old crushes haved faded, I'm up on the shelf lost in my bedroom, scratching at walls and rediscovering myself and tending to my declining mental health Somebody put the vice grips on me tight I'm needing a heart to dry my pathetic tears somebody better hurry, yeah someone just right and free me from my fears hey doesn't anybody hear my wailing cris de coeur c'mon, walk through my door and adore me Will you have the reserved space inside your cozy heart tell me, will all your ex-boyfriends be the subject of your art or could you devote all of your brilliant artist's soul to me you find me in your bedroom, searching through your poetry for mentions of me Somebody put a down payment on me, and how someone better worry about my stupid heart you'd think I'd have learned my lesson by now I hope somebody sees me in the dark and puts me in a firefly jar say baby, please poke some holes in the top hey lady, please don't ever stop your love for me Somebody's gotta give a sh*t and right about now someone's gotta want a little bit of me somehow so hey sugar, please please me and love me do you know you want to I know I can love you too "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I am keeping this..just so you know...it's like a song...and my gosh, it touches... ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow what impact! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
love this - it has a blues song feel about it - good old heart/soul pouring out- ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow!! ![]() ![]() ya got yourself a hit song there ![]() something if feel but never could express as you just did thanks My spirit will rise |
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