Open Poetry #35 |
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Rostrum of Morning |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296![]() |
Pondering the Beginning 1. Concocted phonetic words, taking wing Like water running under a bridge Coupling with other thresholds Breaking any existing boarders into Divine nourishment…gestures explosive! 2. Seeping through, from the inventor’s window A keeping, to write, overcoming repression As the last breath of night, loses its relevance Trying so hard, to stay awake Only to succumb, to the advent songs of morning Digital impressions, like a book of hours sweeping Dark walls, wanting fertile shape, speaking golden filets 3. Who would care for such a quarrel? Between the now, sidestepping dark & multimedia light Casing fierce condemnation for what was… Like a radiant bride, braiding clairvoyant touch Emotions of violent renewal, like an invisible mountain top Life’s articulate persistent yearning Intensely blowing from some riverbank of memory 4. The retina of mind, lends true fusion Unfamiliar familiar, through all the agony of fury Of the wars within us…love recording moments Hot white lights, clocks, going in some cosmic link A single heartbeat like Orion loosened Some vain opium, speaking like a symphony Mainline lovemaking of my senses Night dissolving in the white powder of sunlight 5. Ancient gamblers, compressed of bone Faceless, uncensored embers of echoes Making night sounds, like rolling lovers in a bed Feeding on the stone wheel of diamonds Then is when I long for you… 6. Meanwhile, in this place, I shall dream a single purpose Floating on ever changing weather Of an afternoon moon focus, always hungry For a few leaves left, by the gulls of mind Reflective peace is clean…; ole stretches of hills Seawall of light…”poor amplexious women”, I think…”if they’d only known” Did their suppression know me, then? I am their night inlaid...inception of drift... Quiet house of branch, a window of Magdeline 7. A wavelength of morning and evening Silence Intimate Sanguine Sexuality was meant to be one… Perhaps that is why, we are forever searching for our soul mates Despite drunkenness, drifting with currents We are one! They lied! Perhaps one night may mix with light becoming a blueberry sky Not to bright, nor to dark, but a citrine light |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I like the idea of a blueberry night. Good morning sweety, well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang Lee..I do wish I could find some of whatever inspiration you have I love that last verse especially...the last one was the icing on the cake! |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Great work truly inspired adagio |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, if it is a special poetic potion that you take that enables you to write like this ~ then I gotta get me some! ~ and price is no option! Dang, yer good! ![]() Linda May that citrine light ~ light your night! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
as always- it never fails - i find lines and verses that consume me - well written my friend - ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
love your mind lady~ wish i could get it out like you do~ flowing so smooth even strong words or soft as silk~ My spirit will rise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ As always, you write with excitement...and it is such a pleasure to read! ![]() |
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