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Picture her |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I saw her kissing his lips, So softly she kissed them, My heart to her cleaved, I heard she wore that dress, The cherry one that I miss, The one she said was for my eyes, I felt her love leave my heart, And into another mans arm, Away from me and my love, I heard that she gave him a wish, The love that I once had, And seal it with her angel lips, I know she makes him smile, The smile that I use to know, So happy was I then, How could she give herself? To someone but me, God, why would she do this? I sense her kiss him on the neck, Send down the goose bumps, Those were on my arms, I can see her wipe his tears, When he cries, Knowing that- I could die, I can hear her giggle, And burst into laughter, She feels these, without me, I wonder if she thinks of me, On the lonely nights, The way I think of her tonight. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 this aches |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
heartfelt and bittersweet, but the poem, is a marvelous read, depicts the pain of loss |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Loved it! Very beautiful, filled with longing and ache! ~ARH "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
all of the above and  My spirit will rise |
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