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Open Poetry #35

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Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2005-04-18 04:44 AM

Beam light to
me, a light
of devine power.
Concentrate golden radience,
my body temple
awaits to be
washed with waves
of pulsing energy,
invigorating my core,
pouring beauteous saturation,
energising me, against
the tiresome rigours
of this world.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2005-04-18 05:05 AM

Very nice....

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-04-18 08:16 AM

just what I needed

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-04-18 08:23 AM

well done

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-04-18 02:04 PM

"energising me, against
the tiresome rigours
of this world."

exactly! well done GR.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

5 posted 2005-04-18 04:58 PM

I love the imagery in this well crafted poem!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-04-19 05:04 AM

oh yes

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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