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In Lust |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
I had a conference with my shadow A patient fall in the dense fog of reason It was about my tide How I long for the shortest of desires What a tedious way to be pushed to the brink I have never seen a truth I didn’t like Everyone needs a favorite in lust When I open my mouth I become a bore discolored, ignored A space to be filled an opinion you can't trust You desire to be seen how I wish I could wrap my will around what you give to me Give you some return on your investment Stop the natural course of collapsed reason It’s a feast I know of no other way I have found sick satisfaction in apathy, the will to eat us alive You left me open and it’s the season for minding the store In lust I find all that I trust The Mongrel cat came home, Holding half a head proceeded to show it off to all his new found friends |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Wow. That was sensually fantastic and a true piece of Heaven. I loved this poem all over the place...if it isn't already apparent. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is excellent, the flow, the cadence...the amazing depth. Excellent. TD |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You desire to be seen how I wish I could wrap my will around what you give to me" I really liked this part here....awesome write....  |
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