Open Poetry #35 |
About Life, about Earth |
WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Some believe life is but dust blowing in winds of chance, ‘til death stills the winds. Here, in this silent stillness; despair pervades thought, creates a world of zombies with rock hearts and ice minds. And now, even angels no longer set foot in this place for who would frequent a world where death is the final legacy and the masters choose it this way? Do the rhythms of the sea; its tides and flux and streams tell us there is more? No longer: not the sea, why would it? No, not the sea, but whales! Ahhh, the whales who still sing their strange songs within the waters and halfway across the globe their brethren hear and respond. But technology rips the song apart: a technology of instant gratification; of instant death: the whale dies first then the worshiper of alien thought, the maker of death – the man also dies, silenced by his own noise. No good standing upon the shore today: the song has died and yes, earth life has become nothing but a speck of cosmic dust. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deeply pessimistic, but I understand ... it's really high time to surface from dumbness into the awareness of what we have done to life and Earth! May the whales continue to communicate and may we hear! Powerful write. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Technology is indeed, a double-edged sword. It appears that many of the advances of mankind, come with a price ~ and often it is Mother Nature who pays it. EA |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I bought a Cd of whale songs Maybe there wont be anymore to record if they carry on Excellent words Dave |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"the man also dies, silenced by his own noise" So true Windwalker! I enjoyed and agree with all your thoughts here. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Wow. That really touched me. You have spoken the truth of what Jamiroquai so perfectly labeled "Virtual Insanity." I truly dug this poem. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write! |
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