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Blind Me ... shadorma 6

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-04-16 11:13 PM

Blind Me

Out & Burned;
cast from these eyes: stains
watermarks
blue lined map
a fools folly; unread book
muted amber tome

©sdt'05
shadorma #6

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-04-17 11:15 AM

I receive a strong impression from your powerfully combined message.
Love,
Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-04-17 11:41 AM

Snow
One and one is one.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2005-04-17 11:43 AM

can't say i understand what you mean. but thank you for reading.

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2005-04-17 06:23 PM

enjoy the deep
beauty of your heart~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Aleta
Member

since 2005-04-17

Posts 102
Louisiana

5 posted 2005-04-17 09:39 PM

Oh, that we should be blind to the penetrating taint of our lack of good judgment. Strong emotions captured with the words and the picture.

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

6 posted 2005-04-17 09:44 PM

Touching. Poetry at its core. This was truly an experience in art and life. Beautiful.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2005-06-17 09:06 AM

A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to.

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