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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-04-16 06:17 PM

The One You Adored

She's so cute,
but I know from experience
that the more
you care for someone

the more it hurts
if you lose them...

And I have lost
one before,
one that I
truly adored,

and it seems
to hurt forever
when you and the
one you adored
are no longer
together.

JamesLee
April16
2005

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

1 posted 2005-04-16 06:19 PM

I've never known anyone to in poetry encapsulate everything that I feel so wholly. Magnificent work.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-04-16 08:47 PM

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2005-04-16 10:03 PM

Yes, it does hurt. I know this kind of pain, so well.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-04-16 10:15 PM

yep

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2005-04-17 06:16 AM

another yep!

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2005-04-17 10:29 AM

Just so, dear James! But fear of hurting could be worse, as it conditions your heart.

Love, Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

7 posted 2005-04-17 04:21 PM

For the times I spent with you
Lighting my life in spirits of strung tension
I was alive

For the times I spent with you
Taking me into heights I never dreamed off
I was alive

For the essence of my soul
I thank you

Your words James resonate

And usually in the wrong places
Of the memories in my mind

And what is wrong when it hurts no-one

Dave

For I live
And remember

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2005-04-17 06:00 PM

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Italy Angel
Member

since 2003-09-01

Posts 65
Northern Ca

9 posted 2005-04-17 11:32 PM

Yes, truly a horrible pain. Thanks for the read!

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