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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-04-16 09:27 AM



Over mountain snow
The smell of flowers—

In the wind
A lion’s roar


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-04-16 09:33 AM


simple yet powerful
DavePage
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2 posted 2005-04-16 02:28 PM


Over mountain snow
The smell of flowers—

In the wind
A lion’s roar

In a desert
The smell of flowers

In the dust
A lion's roar

Dave

yv
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3 posted 2005-04-16 06:36 PM


Masterful.  You have made imagery your own personal Petting Zoo.  I love your work...your craftsmanship leaves me in awe.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-04-30 07:51 PM


your is better.
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