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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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The end feels it just began but with goals in mind the haste of arrival one cannot wait. Decline the joy the arduous process from here to there, now to eternity while never flags in protest cannot wait for the ultimate end yet one wishes events would extend. With ends in view goals to reach one cannot wait small voices urge: "press on, forget the past it's finished." When the end arrives endurance will prove it's brevity audited accounts will shed light that life captivated romance entranced it all began from nothing ended in puffs of smoke fleeting faint strokes finished... the end. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-20-2005 12:35 AM).] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
begining an end to begin again  not all end in a puff of smoke~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan Each new end is a new beginning, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Fantastic and philosophically intriguing poem....thanks for sharing.  ....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You gave your thoughts the quick rhythm of events that pass like in a movie ... You are so right! This is the truth. Love, Margherita |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like in a movie Margherita |
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