Open Poetry #35 |
Fustration |
Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Furstation is what I see in your eyes how they well up in tears as you lay your eyes upon my broken spirit. My clouded blood shot windows To comfort you is like a magnetic effect I am drawn to it no matter how much it may back fire. At the same time there is this invisible force that pushes me away from you by your own doing. Why can't I just hug you and kiss you and tell you things will be ok let it not be over let it go more slower if you will for I rather have that then risk losing you Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this feeling...very familiar |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
ah if only the words i write could fully clense the sadness Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
The words demand to be written to but "yet not". Dave |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
yea Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very familiar indeed, I felt it with every line. Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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