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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2005-04-07 10:58 AM

I arrived
in the middle of your monologue
impressed by the way
you spoke with your hands
and drew your audience in
with your eyes
and the rise and fall
of your voice
perfectly timed inflections
subtle innuendo
meant for those
who knew
a patronizing
yet terribly sexy smile
for those
who didn’t

I stood there
in the back
unobtrusively captivated
watching you own
center stage

your eyes caught mine
and for just a moment
the innuendo
was too subtle
the smile
too smug
for anyone else
but me

I watched you
read my eyes
before I looked away
and I knew
you knew
....you always did

I helped myself to a beer
sighed and thought
another time perhaps....

~SEA~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-04-07 11:07 AM

Mmmmm, yes...there are moments
just like that...

I saw it all, SEA...and a delightful
trip for the eyes it was...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-04-07 11:13 AM

A moment captured in eternity here Sea, this is so perfect.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-04-07 12:27 PM

Great imagery here Susan brought the scene to life..
Left me wanting ..more.
~Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-04-08 04:41 AM

Nice...James

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2005-04-08 05:03 AM

In the room with you...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-04-08 12:23 PM

felt like I was intruding on something private and sensual here

thanks for sharing
and bringing back a memory or two for me

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2005-04-09 12:35 PM

thank you for the nice replies...I was unsure if it would play out for anyone else but me LOL after all, it's my memory.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2005-04-09 01:38 AM

And very strange too, it is also one of mine from long, long ago.

Very nice S.

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

9 posted 2005-04-09 03:13 AM

rings very very true...well done!

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

10 posted 2005-04-09 09:16 AM

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2005-04-10 01:48 AM

thank you very much, each of you, for reading and relating

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2005-04-10 09:57 AM

SEA~
Girlie friend ... you painted the scene from a memory caught in time~
Love ya'
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2005-04-10 10:20 AM

SEA ~

Yummy, intriguing moments ~ to be enjoyed another time ~ for real!

Beautifully told! Keep your eyes on the prize! lol

SEA (without the "S")

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2005-04-10 10:26 AM

Wow, this offers the reader some great imagery!
I'm smiling, 'savoring' a similar moment tucked away long ago.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2005-04-10 11:59 AM

Oh Susan, might I say that this is simply
awesome!.. Such a view you gave us..made
me feel as though I were there.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

16 posted 2005-04-10 02:14 PM

This reminds me of a time when....

Great write SEA! hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

17 posted 2005-04-11 10:26 AM

"I watched you
read my eyes
before I looked away
and I knew
you knew
....you always did"

This was really good i liked it!!!

you know he really wants me

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

18 posted 2005-04-11 01:13 PM

you guys are wonderful

thank you

and Jezzika May...aren't you supposed to be doing school work?! LOL

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

19 posted 2005-04-15 11:17 PM

Boy I've missed you

Very nice, brought a smile to my face...

HugZ, Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

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