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from the serpent, the sacred river flowed
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from the serpent, the sacred river flowed |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
The wind softly whispers your name~ as visions of life the begining which erupted the end through mans vain~ as the tree of life bears fruit~ and gardens grow many colors~ but not as an apple on a tree~ or the garden of flowers~ which we see~ with flavors and aromathat stirs what wasnt meant to be~ unless a god from the dome of pleasure only allowed to taste the forbidden fruit from the tree of life~ our creater brought from the sunsless sea the dome of pleasure that fell to the bottom along with machine persision and percise a rare site which forever man shall fight once human untill worlds felt the bite~ as something gone wrong and needs to be right~ boulders, like grain planted in caves of ice~ fertile land in two miles of five dome of pleasure garden of green~ forest of ancients heard as only gods seen~ before their time worlds come alive~ many worlds not meant for here~ how ancients new of wars to be~ how some know they came back to stop what is out of control~ that fear deep within man called guilt mixed in pride~ controlling and destroying the mount, gods bride~ female~ the mother of all~ natures protecter man's greed, makes like a god, but called king, as animals replaced, life's loss from his fall~ as the fire in the sky in a sunless sea~ with caves of ice and two of thee~ woman was the tree of life the sweet honey dew where life began~ the milk of paradise is the sacred river ~ a fountain of youth~ like a river it flows from the demon to the caves of ice~ as human creation was forbidden~ as the fruit of life, the sacred sea, the serpent who saw the mount abore and the gardens ~ in pleasures dome~ when milked, felt like paradise, when mount abore~ sent deep pleasure to keep the knowledge and women and men separate from creating life and being servents to the mother and father and protector of the worlds ~ and nature and seperate untill lands of three~ well the serpent, demon that is part of man`~ caught the sent of honey and his fountain rose~ so as the gods~\ he tasted the forbidden fruit~ he went into the cave that no man could ever measure~ and his fountain flows the sacred river ,now falls to sea as man planted his seed with forbidden fruit bearing life from the tree that only gods ate from~ said it was the woman who wanted him to taste the fruitfrom the tree of knowledge.mother and bearer of life~ that was forbidden~ knowing now the serpent belonged to the man,and he became the demon, fallen from the sunless sea in the dome of pleasure destroyed, as what became when the fountain became a serpent, then demon behold as god gave life, took the remains of ancient worlds drained of life,elements missing, so in ice and in time another world their home will be born~ untill man became demon and caused alphas new world to erupt, and the caves of ice melted along with the sacred river to the lifeless sea, creating the worlds to collide and life to remain as new domains volcanos erupt where worlds where to replace the sunless sea and live in balance, harmany, but worlds collide,with life making unknown, as milk of paradise fell with the end of sacred river, like banks of life in ice, we now have sperm banks, the elements created creatures and land upon sea, the demon hid truth like an element stolen, need to start over with what was new, worlds collide, their way home placed in the bottom of the sea, buried for eternity, so a new dome of wood, and creatures of two, wait for the storms and wars and loss from the angry gods to calm, starting over yet unable to get the animal out of man, the , like a lion, called king blame woman when pleasure over came with greed, answere is inside deep where one can only know, what man pretends to look for and tell stories of what began the end. only seeking treasure and pleasure inside, gods wrath with sin, but seperating good seed from bad, to plant again ~ with sacred sun~ hope for life~ RESURRECTION~ deep buried faith~in virture IN HUMANITY~ A TREASURE ONLY FOUND WITHIN GODS SEED GOLDEN FILLED WITH WISDOM AND KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING, FOREVER SURVIVING PASSING TESTS, NOT ONES MAN MAKES TO ACCOMODATE HIS GREED, AND TO SLOW POPULATION AS THIS WORLD SOON COULD END AS LIFE IS SUCKED OUT AND WATER BECAME TOXIC the main element for life, man poisoned minds as this land he stole and destroyed. woman is love and life and strong when belief and self love stay in,but ones comfortable in their sin shall feed back to the pits of hell when they took from god and our mother life as meant,to return lost worlds andto fill the universe with love for all the gods to see and ancient ones back where they where suppose to be,love as women love and the gods made companions with compassion for life, caring and nurturing so life forever lives, and only the gods give life, to place their destiny, life was turned upside down, and souls got lost through time when only they knew and know mans time shall end they try to copy and create and poison still runs through,gold is honey as sweet as nector, god was the bee , that pollinated and ate from fruit of honey dew and drank the milk of paradise. and created life before the demon poisoned the queen ~mother~ of all even made gods son fall so love and truth be unknown, be gay and be love be joy and know rainbow of colors a new way of life, seeds planted, but neglected so couldnt grow, now know and see what others saw,yet was not told truth to understand. yes the garden of eden fell to the sea, atlantis is what they call it, but another eden a world of its own, fell to the sea, once lifeless, then became full of life not as before, deep within the sea, life is born water the key ~let the poisoned land burn so new can grow, let the storms and the winds give new breath to the air, lightning boltz from his rod shall start a fire then the thunder will be the knell for manfilled with demon and sin remind onesto change who is the father and strength and reming how powerful he sounds the earth shall open and a fountain shall appear circles will come in 3 with 6 lights so ones will know and the dome will return and mount another garden. but the beast, is shall be offered to the fire when the earth opens and all will fear god like before as for the mark of the beast, scars left after healing pain time after time always be there as a mark to remind what the beast can do and why you must fear god, who tested to take the beast out of you, for eternal life with love and peace. ` ` ` ` |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An epic...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES You leave me speachless. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marsha, this impressive flow of words shows your care for humanity and our Mother Earth. May we awaken to Love! So that the apocaliptic events will be stopped and give way to a new creation.... starting from our hearts. Thank you, dear heart. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome, MGROVEs. Saving for my library to read again.  ....jo |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Amazing write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
bless you all for your kind replies to my late night ramblings that was unstopable and goes on and on and on~ this is the first time i read it myself~ i have to admit an embarrasment,but your kind replies help that,thanks again~ ` My spirit will rise |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, rant or not, it was extremely necessary, for it and you have converted me OUTSTANDING! You've touched on so so many subjects....especially enjoyed the beginning, while you explained about the invisible gift we all have, but use less and less as we are smitten.... Hugs to you for this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I knew this was in you waiting to come out awesome piece!  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
lee~  i am honored with your kind reply to my rambling~dixie~  a heartfelt thanks from me to one so kind~ your replies ease the insecurities i feel when those "moments" happen~ My spirit will rise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed the read....is this poetry or prophecy...James |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A journey down a long garden path. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
persision and percise a rare site which forever man shall fight once human untill worlds felt the bite~ as something gone wrong and needs to be right~ Beautiful. So glad that I didnt miss this. Sometimes when we rant, we write our best. Very well done. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I love how you started this out slow and then speeded it up towards the end, you could almost takethespacesoutfrombetweenthewords =) nice, i like this a lot, great feeling! - River How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Marsha I stop reading 3/4 qtrs through and I doubt the rest could answer questions on it - I couldn't. Poetry is sexless - you dont have men or women when you write - you report. You take your talent, your vision, your words and you write without discrimination. The writing is superb, brilliant but write as you believe and then believe again. Dave |
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