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Open Poetry #35

At The Club

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-04-15 04:52 AM

At The Club

Step into my world
of fast cars and
chorus girls.
Take a ride in
my shiny Mercedes,
think in your wildest
dreams that you might
have a chance to get me.
Spend a night in the
mansion with me, hug me
and kiss me and then
when the morning comes,
go away and forget me.
You were just another
night on the town.
Tomorrow I'm back at
the club buying a new
lovely a new round.

JamesLee
April13
2005
This is not meant
to glamorize the
club life, only
to reveal it.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-04-15 02:51 PM

As long as you pay for it James

dave

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2005-04-15 03:48 PM

ha man that is so like a club to so so so like a club good write

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-04-15 04:09 PM

yeah, I don't like clubs much, and don't like men with fancy cars either

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-04-16 05:43 PM

Thank you Dave, Foxy and passing for the nice responses...James

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