Open Poetry #35 |
Spirits Keep |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
When those moments come that I can no longer maintain the heavy strain of the keep of another’s searing pain I give it up to the Ancient Ones in the knowing that they will hold it ever tender until the tears are spilled, the ache stilled And in doing so I’ve done what I can do~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, And that you have. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is beautiful |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is just great bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a wonderful thought Marge. Heart hugs. For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
and this is so you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
your ever-flourishing art and your thought-stream never fail to touch me regards sudhir |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A magic and mystical write! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
I love this very nice Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
marge~ this is beautifull My spirit will rise |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
One can only ever do what one can! Take care! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
just wanted to touch spirits love this picture, i lost the code for mine that was on my sig for a while. darn. what do you think something is telling me when i see them and they have their hands by their mouths moving their fingers . i would say to speak for them, but it seems to be more than that, or i am not sure yet of what to speak of. help me on this one so i can get it out. My spirit will rise |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I do so understand this ~ and you said it beautifully! The visual form of the poem was very effective in showing the lessening of the burden by allowing the Ancients Ones to carry what no longer can be endured. Love & Wisdom of the Ancient Ones, EO |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome write Marge! Eric |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
((((((Marge)))))) Thank you for your prayers. I love this one and am making a special place for it. .....jo |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
amazng marriage of pic and poem...love the whole feel of it...I have a friend who would really love it with your permission I will share it with her... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I needed this one today Margie... thank you dear.... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh my gosh...how could the soul not feel the spirit of this powerful poem...Your words go deep where they become a feast to the soul...I love it...**hugs** |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Another of my favorites, Marge. Please offer my pain to the spirits!! Thank you, my galpal. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all for the kindness of your replies~ Playing a little 'catch up' on my thankee's here~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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