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Spring (Haiku) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 Springtime on the bay the tips of water grasses dripping with diamonds. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I love the loons!!!!!!!!! Great haiku. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
yep - you say spring very well Nancy - this is just terrific - loved it - Paul |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautifully done!  |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ideas! amidst this scattering of Haiku Refreshing old friends e |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wonderful haiku, Nancy. I like it. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You know I love this!! Hugs & Miss Ya!! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Spring, a poets eyes You cannot escape, don't try! An Enchantress has you captured. enjoyed ----------ice ><> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooohhhhhhh very pwetty |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very beautiful haiku Tinker. Your bay must be a wonderous place. I can feel it's essence in your words and images. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
owwww, I knew I was in for a real treat when I clicked on you, and never, no never disappointed...this was lovely, thanks so much for sharing that breath taking beauty... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
a springtime jewel... just lovely, Nancy. K |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Good one, enjoyed. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I can picture the grasses dripping diamonds. An exquisite Haiku, Nancy! sadie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
nice,but?? leaves me unsatisfied arthur |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Enjoyed! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Appealing to the senses. Certainly you write spring as well as everything m'dear. TD |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Enchantress, What a jewel this is! I can visualize the light playing among the golden seed and scintillating water. The beauty of this is in the perception, and of course, the mastery of the poet. I would have only noticed the water, but you--you noticed the seed diamond! miscee |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
delicate, fresh - simply lovely Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Jonathan Junior Member
since 2005-05-04
Posts 11Paris |
Springtime on the bay the tips of water grasses dripping with diamonds Time seems held at bay - grasses'rippling surpasses Time - now sprung away ... Life : A finite succession of infinite opportunities |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Yet another great one! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
AaaahhhhhhH, bring it on...bring it ON! INclan |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Nancy...If only we could have Spring forever.Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very nicely done! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Nancy! I had read this poem when you posted it and have just popped back in again for another read once it came back into view. As I was now reading the replies you had received, I saw that I hadn't left one myself when I first read it! Well, my dear poetess, the fact that I came back for another read is a good indication that I enjoyed it very much the first time through! lol  Loveya! Linda  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you all for reading and replying to my post. It is my selfish pleasure to read your responses. ~Smiles, Hugs & Love, Nancy~ |
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