I've counted to two - I'm allowed a third

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Open Poetry #35

I've counted to two - I'm allowed a third

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-04-13 06:21 PM

I dont know how many people run a CD on the same machine while everything but it often seems a good to wait between tracks to think as it labours

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Across electric we focused energy melting natural elements smouldering through the air in melting passion of gut wrenching pre-science

Networks of lights brown yellow cente offset show a light ceiling reflecting on a brown floor

Floor of a weight bearing colour
Above white reflecting
Cream white

Are a dream
Pasted on cheap apartments

And we never touched them

We touched abobe darkened magic transcient in image as colour lights attitude changed something

To visions that needed no drugs no stuff
To create or escape

We created in years

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-04-13 06:24 PM

The Title should have been

"One, Two, Many"

Dave

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Member Seraphic

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with you

2 posted 2005-04-13 08:10 PM

liked the images...Dave did you know you can edit the title of your own poem? If you do it in the time you are allowed to edit your poem I believe.

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