Open Poetry #35 |
Something Phishy This Way Cometh |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A pair of sweet lovely ladies and me, I in third best suit between the beauties; Harbor walking in the dying of day, To dine and talk and return the same way, The sights were seen quickly in the passing, Of ships, dragon paddles, song and dancing, Walking by them all to the restaurant; Of all the parts only the service was want, The order was in disorder throughout, Sequence is part of what dining's about, Water, drinking water, where can it be? Now where ever did that waitress flee? But when all was finally said and done The meal was good and the evening was fun. Gloom |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent imagery here Gloom. I hope the meal was satisfactory. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I hope you didn't leave a tip maybe the waitress would take the hint if she didn't get the money |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ will come back to this later... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
LOL loved the title...and good to see you having fun! ~ARH "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a wonderful evening, though... to be between two roses... Enjoyed this, Professor... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The three of us, we walked the pace Across, around to bridge and lace Familiar thoughts from words on blue. Adding one to those of two. The evening's breeze, the water's spray Made for walking along the way. Seafood tastes, a crab delight Even though, and then in spite Of order's dis and service poor The meal was nice, the company more. So what of that, the mood was light Friendship shared in new this night. To bind and blend the eastern coast The three of us, in share...to toast. And yes, the evening was fun for me To meet, to learn and know, we three. Thanks again to each M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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