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ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2005-04-13 08:50 AM

The while:
Above
All seems death-yet,
Lifeless-leafless-
Branches,
Strangleheld
In winters hold.

The while:
Roots explore
Gripping walls
Of ice abandoned
Caverns.

The while:
The spring sun
Seems cold;
But the earth
Is easily aroused,
Urging radicals
To tongue-test mana,
Stored in its catacombs.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-04-13 09:04 AM

Exploration...

a good thing.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-04-13 09:08 AM

Excellent write Ford..much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-04-13 09:41 AM

Very nice indeed Ford. hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-04-13 09:46 AM

Ice,
A neckless of metaphors, enjoyed.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2005-04-13 09:47 AM

the while:
poets sip java,
feel awakening thoughts spring
gifts of the season

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

6 posted 2005-04-13 10:11 AM

Yes this is a excellent write; well written too; I like it!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2005-04-13 10:41 AM

Ford

"But the earth
Is easily aroused,
Urging radicals
To tongue-test mana,
Stored in its catacombs."

Beautiful!!!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-04-13 03:25 PM

good write here

enjoyed

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

9 posted 2005-04-13 11:42 PM

Ford,
I agree with all the others on this piece.
Love it my friend.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-04-18 04:15 AM

like all the above~
another great one~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2005-04-18 11:31 AM

I felt a wandering of sorts upon reading this...like possiblities floating slowly over my head, with the ability to choose

This was tremendous!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2005-04-18 11:54 AM

You succinctly ~ yet ever so effectively! ~ brought the reader from the cold and dark of winter into the promise of new life in spring.

Love & Spring Light,
EA

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