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Open Poetry #35

what a tragedy..

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-04-12 01:30 AM

walking down the street
and i want to dance
not for joy
or for sorrow
but for life.

"what a tragedy,
she's restless."

please don't try and write down
everything
all the words you could write down
will never fill your void
no matter how many there are
quantity over quality
and you just don't have it down.

"what a tragedy,
she's lonely."

the world wants love
it moves on love
but i'm rusty
and i'm tired
should my heart
be put in a retirement home
for something i can't control.

"what a tragedy,
she's in love."

with life.

longte
Member

since 2005-04-06

Posts 199
Australia

1 posted 2005-04-12 09:47 AM

Isn't it amazing how other people see us

lost in their structured worlds never realising that Our way might work too

Live It

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2005-04-12 11:50 AM

The mind is its own place, and in it self
Can make a Heav'n of Hell, a Hell of Heav'n.

PL:1.255 Milton.

nice.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-04-12 11:54 AM

everyone should have such tragedy....
one of my favorite sayings?
Enjoy life, this ain't no dress rehearsal....

very very well done !!!!!!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-04-12 06:20 PM

this is good

love that ending!

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