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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2005-04-11 06:20 PM



tuesday wishes

come in a cup
of citrus’ and butterflies

bees and beetles buzz
my waking moments

       in this halfway sky
but i
have no business here

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-04-11 06:26 PM


I love this Maree...bees were buzzing around me yesterday (I tried not to swat)  Spring is here  and so are you~~ what a nice treat
hugs


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Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-04-11 06:40 PM



Ummm, I like this, Maree.
That sense of intrusion, not
the outside upon us;
but our selves, where
harmony is not residing.

Well, that's what I got.

It's good, and the less you write, lately,
the more you say.

It wears well on you.


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-04-12 01:53 AM


Enjoyed...James
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2005-04-12 03:16 AM


short and sweet, beautiful write bella
vlraynes
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5 posted 2005-04-12 04:20 AM



Much said, in just a few words...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

wranx
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6 posted 2005-04-12 06:22 PM


What then, of Wednesday wishes?

I understand about the "belonging"

(I know, I have some catching up to do. I'll pop in from time to time to read)

Love the Tuesday sketch, Darksis

gemjop
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7 posted 2005-04-12 06:58 PM


This suits my mood perfectly! The word 'bumble bee' or words even, always make me smile. I like bees. hehe.

Always good to read you sexhy lady. x

Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2005-04-12 07:01 PM


sleeping in late?
nice to see you buzz onto this blue screen

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2005-04-13 03:55 AM


wonderful!
Enchantress
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10 posted 2005-04-13 01:32 PM


"tuesday wishes

come in a cup
of citrus’ and butterflies

bees and beetles buzz
my waking moments"

Enjoyed this Maree..
Love the way it made me feel.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2005-04-13 01:35 PM


"halfway sky"

love that...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Martie
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12 posted 2005-04-13 01:38 PM


Maree

you always walk so well on the edge and into feelings.  

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13 posted 2005-04-25 01:47 PM


if we were always where we were meant to be...wouldnt make as many beautiful discoveries...

always be exactly where you are at

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2005-04-26 02:55 PM


with brevity you write the world with words Maree..

I truly am a fan yanno  

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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15 posted 2005-04-27 03:22 PM


Tuesday wishes.....I've had a few, on some Tuesdays like this one was....I'm glad to see it can be so much the same, half a world away....

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yv
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16 posted 2005-04-27 11:41 PM


You are a true immortal!!  I love your work.  Oh! that I could become a master of words and expression as you are!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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