Open Poetry #35 |
Sea of Sorrow |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Emotions wash over me Wave upon wave Sand and water A mixture of feelings Churning inside of me I gasp for air Only to drink down More of my bitter regret My eyes sting from the salt Making it hard to see What made me think I was ever qualified to Walk on water or even attempt To calm the sea The water seeps into me I sink deeper into despair No longer able to breathe air The last bubble escapes me My lungs feel the burden Unable to be free The sea becomes a buffer Drowning out all sounds No more will tears be seen Upon my face blended into The surroundings one by one Your love like the ocean Has overwhelmed this man Never will I be so willing I have lost myself I have become undone [This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (04-11-2005 11:29 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
"Never will I be so willing" that line speaks volumes to me... very well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate to this touching piece |
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