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Open Poetry #35

the past will it repeat?

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-04-09 11:03 PM

slit my throat can u see it
the blood that pours on me
my body can you taste it?

cooper metal taste of solitude
in my very being my grasp I see
your eyes as they are crimson red
with ill intentions.

I can not tell the difference anymore
I don't know why I bother to feel anymore
tears shed down my face with confusement
will this work out or will I be crushed into
a thousands ways known possible.

will my tree branch finally snap into
a thousand faces as you snicker from a
far a laugh how you broken my spirit and
soul and blame it all on me

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-04-11 02:30 PM

Very difficult to get any sort of handle on this

I'm not really sure if you did

It seems more a rant

Can I ask that you read afterwards but in honesty I shouldn't because I dont have the patience to stop and do it properly

I just sit at the keyboard and let it come out and only a long time later do I revise and even then I often feel the original was the raw, but who wants the raw, since they will probably get sued for the distress of someone entering a bookshop.

Dave

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