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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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She’s waiting She’s waiting for you To pretend it matters That the sky Was never so blue The room is dark Its curtains are drawn Somewhere outside An invisible dog Barks in a neighbor’s yard |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"She’s waiting for you To pretend it matters" most of us are....  |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Sea, Whatever its merits, my things, if at all, draw response from a varied audience. Thank you for reading . . . John |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a good one; I like the use of imagery in the poem! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
She’s waiting for you To pretend it matters God, that bites down hard and shakes I never thought of it like that before? I'd rather hurt a thousand times, then have someone pretend...that would be an amputation of the heart....mind and soul |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
good play!!! but sad audience. enjoyed |
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