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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2005-04-09 07:45 PM

By what manner whispers a dream
the name of this woman of needs
though curtained the window
and locked the doors
to the haunting of fantasy?

Don’t forget he implores
but I’ve moved from the place
where once I bowed to his grace
for he mirrors an untrue reflection
down here on the earthly plane.

It’s a party trick; we’re at a masked ball,
and to suffer the loss is no chore
when pulling the strings of images
up the pathway of dishonesty.

Yes, I’ll remember weakness and fear
and how it diminishes love.
I’ll remember the power of mind
that became as a candle light
but excuse me, I’m busy,
I’m learning to lie
and forget what it feels like to cry!

(Just a vent, I guess)

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-04-09 09:06 PM

Helen

"but excuse me, I’m busy,
I’m learning to lie
and forget what it feels like to cry!"

Those last three lines are very powerful...I want to tell you....No, you don't lie...at least your writing is very truth filled...and I have heard you cry.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-04-09 09:42 PM

"It’s a party trick; we’re at a masked ball,
and to suffer the loss is no chore
when pulling the strings of images
up the pathway of dishonesty."

Very profound writing! Like your vent!

....jo

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

3 posted 2005-04-11 03:34 PM

Yes this is very profound writing. I like it!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-04-11 03:56 PM

Yes, I’ll remember weakness and fear
and how it diminishes love.

so very sad Helen...been through some of that myself~~

hugs
M

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

5 posted 2005-04-11 04:00 PM

Wow! I like this

Its just nice to vent and get it out.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2005-04-11 05:13 PM

Thanks to all for the read.

I guess "things" are only sad if we make them so. I'm learning, you see, about the power of mind - immortal mind.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2005-04-12 05:59 PM

Great Vent!

Eric

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