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The Areas of Blind
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The Areas of Blind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Areas of Blind I chase the shadows of my mind And do not know what I will find Perhaps I’ll find a firefly To light the dark within my sigh It is the moment I would know The turn of green that says to go I feel so tired of the red Of living life and being dead I can’t dismiss the real of hurt The struggle over common dirt The apathy that moves with time I find no sight beyond the grime The world I see is fantasy My dream of Eve and ecstasy My egos change of what is real Into my fantasies appeal But this I cannot share with you For each one has their private view |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
See More Keep repeating the first stanza. Even though the rest is dark, have faith, the firefly exists... enjoyed ---------ice ><> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I feel so tired of the red Of living life and being dead" nodding I've had a very bad case of this, so...a little moth told me, and she is very wise, that the only way to fill a hole, was to dig one. My garden is going to be beautiful this year.  grin...you should listen to her yanno.  I love you seymour. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at what you did, Sy... you made serenity smile...    |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write enjoyed bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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freewheelin Member
since 2005-04-09
Posts 53 |
magnificent write, thanks for sharing something personal. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Of living life and being dead this line touches~~~ M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice I do believe in fireflies. serenity, Happy gardening. Sunshine Happy day, bernie Thank yo so much. freewheelin Thank you friend. Daureen Smile and the world smiles with you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such wisdom in flowing rhyme, you do it so very well Sir Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, May your days be full of cheery And your nights be spent with deary |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this aches I relate to it well hang in there |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sorry I'm late today dear Sy. Am I still in time for tea and an extra hug? Good!! This is sad...so you may have two! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, I'm hanging. Nancy, Thanks for the two hugs. |
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