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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Streak of light, lazer beam shaft, evanescent on floors, coffee aroma pervading. babbling undertone chatter, warm leather Davenport, gripping hand tackiness. Darkling eyes examine, sifting words evenly, i look beyond to seek you, the real you, not the masked, in shadowed seclusion. Will your guard drop to uncloak? What impells me? Noble concern for your hearts comfort. Listening intently to your languid voice moving through me like a wave in a cove. Entangling my thoughts in your web of sublime expression. Senseual tilting and gesturing thrilling me. Sipping, observing, learning, you tick to my tock, slowly, yet time has moved swiftly silent. Dark the room dims in twilight, your eyes reflecting elongated candle flame in the gloom. Your hand touches mine, silken dreams tumbling from head to soul, catching breath. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Definately your best ever Phil. I see such growth in your writing lately. Very well done indeed sir! This'n is a  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Goldenrose I'd say you had a normal day. LOL Good write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I must agree with Gentle Spirit |
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