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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2005-04-08 04:45 AM

Wind waves blustering
to my cavern
depths, inner cries
mingling with whistling
wind cold, sombre.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)
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longte
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since 2005-04-06
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1 posted 2005-04-08 10:23 AM

Feeling of Cold and Lonliness

very effective

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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2 posted 2005-04-08 10:59 AM

You expressed the feeling with such brevity. Well done.
mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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3 posted 2005-04-08 11:17 AM

The cries one hears from those lonely moments. Nice imagery Goldenrose.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-04-08 12:11 PM

nice
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