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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-04-07 11:22 AM

The storm is mine again,
having turned direction
it now resides within,
having sought to be some shelter
instead i wear your scornful ire,
having pushed the pauses
with my own impatience,
and can't help but wonder
if it were these selfish longings
to bring this tarnish,
or had i been standing solo
beneath the warping
of the cloud's heart all along.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (04-08-2005 11:35 PM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-04-07 11:23 AM

The storm is mine again
having turned direction
and now resides inside,

I am no stranger to this storm Michelle,
and it sure can be a brutal storm at times.
Feeling this one with you....

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2005-04-07 11:27 AM

thank you
for understanding
hugs, m

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-04-07 11:56 AM

yeah...feelin this one...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-04-07 12:29 PM

inkedgoddess
Something to think about, enjoyed the write.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2005-04-07 01:29 PM

Powerful rendering of your inner storm, dear Michele!

Ahh these longings!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-04-07 01:31 PM

you're never alone

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

7 posted 2005-04-08 07:38 PM

bumping you hard and fast as only a brooklyn boy can!

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2005-04-09 09:18 AM

"The storm is mine again,
having turned direction
it now resides within,"

Sounds as if you were seeking shelter from a different storm and walked into another gale...

Did you take too much for granted?

*"Now there's a wall between us, somethin' there's been lost
I took too much for granted, got my signals crossed.

"can't help but wonder
if it were these selfish longings
to bring this tarnish,
or had i been standing solo
beneath the warping
of the cloud's heart all along."

Was the clouds heart warping, or were you trying to give shelter from the storm by fulfilling anothers needs and ignoring your own?

*"Suddenly I turned around and she was standin' there
With silver bracelets on her wrists and flowers in her hair.
She walked up to me so gracefully and took my crown of thorns."

These are the questions that came to mind as I read this poem....

----------ice
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* Bob Dylan-"Shelter from the storm"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2005-04-09 01:30 PM

thanks for stopping by; and your indepth very perceptive take on this ice

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2005-04-09 10:16 PM

The emotion in this write was stunning InkedOne...Hugs,
TD

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