Open Poetry #35 |
When She Smiles |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
When She Smiles Once upon a time in New York City I came face to face with the dawn light so pretty warming my bones with golden rays spreading out like a blanket over those frozen days and then I saw her face then she gave me the first taste of her honey sweet love and it felt like heaven above was right here in my arms she baptised me with her charms and so it goes and now I know When she smiles all my cares float away when she smiles I want to be with her forever and a day There a came a time in late November when I came to live with her we're happy as bunnies and angels and coins dropped in the wishing well and I saw her smile cheeks blushing, coloring her style in pink and strawberry red as she climbs back into bed and right back into my heart she always plays the lead part in the musicals in my soul and so I was made whole When she smiled all my pain washed away when she smiled I want to be with her forever and a day if I could I surely would and the clouds burst on the city but we'll stay warm in perfect serenity Every single time she kisses me I can hear the distant springtime's melodies and I dedicate my word pictures to her in the early chill of December she burns my worries to ashes I dive right off her eyelashes and into the wellspring in her eyes such a beautiful sunrise and the daylight is amazing me together we discover a shining blue sea inside us, swimming, wading when I wake up, always I'm anticipating When she smiles all the past is meaningless when she smiles she is the definition of happiness for me she makes me see the clouds giving way to green and we'll stay like this for eternity Once upon a late autumn grey an Aries lady decided to stay forever and a day and I can't help but love her when she smiles that way "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sounds like she's smiling you a river...which will endow you with many fond memories, setting you both on a smooth path...uncharted with no worries...wonderful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Enjoyed.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I am addicted. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zach~ Glad this one came around ... it's just lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, those Aries ladies can be somethin' else great write here, what a tribute! |
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